[Four. Oh, Nine...] reVISION* April 25, 2008
Walking backwards down I-10 to the [409]
Someone said it smells like money…
I say it reeks of corrosive atoms
clinging to my cashmere.Divide the drugs equally,
subtract the middle class,
multiply high school sweethearts,
add crashing cars, killing kids-
this graffiti-ridden coffin is essential.Notice not the catalytic cloud
in the atmosphere;
but behold
bullets raining into a sea
of asthmatic mannequins
drowning effortlessly
in their own handcrafted
wasteland observatory.
I don’t think this one sounds masculine at all. It’s so you. Great job, GIRL! Keep up the good work!
Love you,
Aunt Sandy
ya th 409 goes hard.. lol. miss ya blair <3 brooks
Great job Blair. Don’t be discouraged about the male thing. About your poem, I can relate totally. I’m really proud of you. Keep up the good work.
Blair sure got the 409 area code right. Obviously a kid with brains and talent. mary Karr
Some of us made it out – never to return – God willing.
Excellent poem.