Hello Blair,
I went to school with your mom. I read most all of your poetry. It is very deep and complex.Very impressive for a 21 year old. Let me just say something. My mother gave me some good advice that has become my motto, “Keep it simple stupid, some of us are not that smart” what she meant was, If the poetry is too hard for the common person, your target group will be very small.
Now, if you are really clever; write poetry that has a message and is pleasing for the common person, with a duel meaning embedded within for those that live for the deep and complex.
If you want some good Ideas for your site, and are not afraid of some hardcore critic’s that are quiet when you miss the mark, and expend great adoration on those that write something well written. Check out where I go to improve my poetry passion, Poetrydances.com.
I leave you with a non-traditional Haiku.
Revolutionary Haiku
The constitution
Failing innate liberties
A democracy
write a Peach Poem!
and you definitely need a pic of that little Peach up in here.
Hello Blair,
I went to school with your mom. I read most all of your poetry. It is very deep and complex.Very impressive for a 21 year old. Let me just say something. My mother gave me some good advice that has become my motto, “Keep it simple stupid, some of us are not that smart” what she meant was, If the poetry is too hard for the common person, your target group will be very small.
Now, if you are really clever; write poetry that has a message and is pleasing for the common person, with a duel meaning embedded within for those that live for the deep and complex.
If you want some good Ideas for your site, and are not afraid of some hardcore critic’s that are quiet when you miss the mark, and expend great adoration on those that write something well written. Check out where I go to improve my poetry passion, Poetrydances.com.
I leave you with a non-traditional Haiku.
Revolutionary Haiku
The constitution
Failing innate liberties
A democracy
Have a blessed day,
Howard
My friend, Howard Kern, died March 30th. His book of poetry will soon be published.